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Post by MIUMI on Aug 20, 2012 20:28:56 GMT -7
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HEIGHT: five foot six inches WEIGHT: 160 pounds FACE CLAIM: [b]KUROSHITSUJI[/b] | Ciel Phantomhive & Lady Phantomhive | miumi harou benrame
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Miumi Harou, is merely a broken mirror hanging on the wall with pieces of glass just waiting to fall free; potientally due to him possibly being bipolar.
One typically notices despite Miumi’s rather off-setting appearance that he is still a very sweet and kind person a majority of the time, but one could assume this is due to being raised primarily by his mother. Of course with this kindness Miumi has time and time again been hurt by other people due to his overly optimistic views. These views often cause Miumi to believe there is good within everyone; even if it really isn’t there, but he is quite stubborn . More often when one goes to speak to Miumi they’ll probably notice that he is both shy and socially awkward , but will typically responding with a wide grin and a soft voice. This can be extended to the fact Miumi became socially withdrawn due to not having many good friends and to prevent himself from getting hurt. Often times though Miumi tends to be the end of a joke and merely acts as if he doesn’t understand giving the impression he is naïve , but in reality he is simply going with the flow. This is done to obtain what he wants giving him both acalculating and potentially manipulative mind-set.
Miumi is quite well known for his excessive energy and is typically labeled as being hyper and sometimes just a down right spaz . The latter comes from Miumi attempting parkour and typically adding his input into things that don’t concern him such as fights. Typically Miumi is viewed as apacifist , as he believes that most problems can be solved without the primitive presence of violence and bloodshed. Of course he is considered ahypocrite because he often turns to violence when enraged thus giving him a temper; this is assumed to be caused by the imbalances due to his transformations. . Of course, Miumi isn’t all sugar and gum-drops because he indeed has a dark side which like the moon is often not seen. He harbors hatred towards those whom enjoy violence and displays an almost cold and stand-offish attitude towards them and in fights he can be labeled as sadistic . While typically in physical fights he is often beaten due to being petite so he often becomesbelligerent and verbally abusive .
He often seems to be remorseful for these out bursts and would control it by self-discipline such as practicing with his shinai until his hands would blister and split. Some notice this and call him a masochist. While in all honesty at times Miumi can often be absent-minded and this leads him to be reckless , often getting him in awkward situations. While Miumi is afraid of being alone he also seems to dislike large groups and displays more awkwardness as he often talks to stuffed animals. It can simply be stated that Miumi is unstable and clearly is possibly bipolar . Ontop of that thought Miumi is often deceptive and sneaky often not revealing the full truth on a variety of things. He is often also strange and socially withdrawn after changes.
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Miumi Harou Berame; is merely a domesticated wolf walking in the guise of humanity. Miumi is quite small person and due to his build is often mistaken for a girl due to being only around five foot six inches [5’6”] and having a very lean build which is due to years of training and attempting to win his father's approval thus Miumi is primarily lean muscle weighting around one hundred and sixty [160 lbs] . One of Miumi’s prominent features would be his sable obsidian locks which cascade down his back and have been styled in a very particular way with the assistance of thinning sheers, chunking sheers and a razor. Miumi’s face is typically obscured by a veil of obsidian locks which have been thinned and layered giving it both a natural bounce and choppiness, while the hair typically is brushed from the right side over so it obscures his left eye. While on both sides it is typically choppy and is typically the longer on the left side. In the back Miumi has had his hair texturized giving it a rough and wild appearance despite its soft texture. It is a mass of different layers giving it a wild and choppy look. Occasionally for forma situations it can be curled and worn up for pictures though it is seldom done.
Though in contrast of Miumi’s sable locks his porcelain pale skin seems almost haunting and sickly; tho in the right light gives him doll like qualities. Starting at the crown of Miumi’s head there is a rather jagged scar running from just above his left temple to around the middle of his forehead; while it isn’t deep it is slightly noticeable it is from an accident that Miumi was younger. Miumi’s hair style hides one of Miumi’s rather unique traits Miumi has Dichromatic eyes one is a piercing icy blue while the other is a deep chocolate brown and he hides the brown eye as he finds It slightly odd; and people tend to point it out to him. Of course, Miumi wears a pair of thin black glasses, which also surface dual purposes of keeping his hair out of his eyes and allowing him to read things easier. Miumi also tends to stick his tongue out often to twist the two metal rings that are his snakebites. Otherwise then that Miumi has no other facial piercings but has his ears pierced a variety of times. Tho many people notice that Miumi often wears a variety of hoodies that have animal like appendages.
He has a variety of stud earrings totaling up to four in each ears and then he has one ring at the very top, but his most noticeable earring that he seems to be very defensive about people touching; is a dangling earring which is made of silver with teardrop shape sapphire on one side with ruby attached to the other forming an entire heart on both sides. It appears to have two sets of initials engraved on the posts that hold them in place. One would assume it is his parents. Another trinket that is often seen with Miumi is a necklace; which once belonged to Miumi’s mother; it is a small crystalline rose and is a heirloom of the Berame family. Taking Miumi’s thin build into consideration one tends to notice Miumi has very narrow shoulders; lacking the normal bulk of a male while still slightly broader than the average female. A narrow torso and wider hips are typically concealed underneath a hoodie of some sort from some cartoon and a button up shirt with the last two buttons undone revealing the pale skin of his stomach and his naval. He typically is seen wearing a women’s skirt or something with a variety of chains hanging as well as belts.
Due to the nature of his powers he can hide any abnormal features normally, so outwardly not that different. [/style][STYLE=color: #191919; font-size: 10px; margin-top: 10px; margin-left: 10px;]ABOUT PAST EVENTS[/style][STYLE= margin: 0px 10px 0px 10px; border: 2px solid #191919; padding: 2px; font-family: verdana; height: 125px; overflow: auto; font-size: 10px; text-align: justify; background-color: #ffffff; opacity: 0.8]
Born in Osaka, Japan to his mother, SOLA , a mutant with the power of empathetic telepathy and his father, NAMAKUBI , whom was a mutant with the ability of mind-reading and mental suggestions. However, due to the nature of both of his parent’s powers it is quite the mystery where a power like his truly came from, but they accept him for it regardless. However, Miumi was born with a couple medical problems including an underactive thyroid, which later would cause him to be quite pudgy and at times considered obese. At a young age however he started taking both KENDO ; at request of his father, and GYMNASTICS , while the later also incorporated a dance class, as it appeared it made him happy and his mother didn’t see any harm in it. In spite of this as Miumi went up through the primary school and upon entering secondary school Miumi began to gain a lot of weight to the point he was embrassed and often got quite depressed
His parent’s often would rely upon their mutant powers however in attempts to console him; essentially, in a minor way brain-washing him into thinking he was fine. This worked but the effects were often only temporary. It was in SECONDARY SCHOOL when Miumi had found a sempai whom he enjoyed and often spent hours in the kendo club practicing with. It was Miumi’s first crush and unfortunately, due to Miumi being both male and quite pudgy it ended quite badly. It ended on VALENTINES DAY when Miumi had gone along with the tradition of making hand-made chocolates for the one you liked. He had spent hours test-tasting and trying to get it to come out right and ended up making around six different batches until his mom helped him and they placed them in a small box and decorated it with a colorful wrapping paper.
It resulted with Miumi getting yelled at harassed but the worst for Miumi, was it was by his sempai and they even threw the chocolate at him. It was after that Miumi entered a deep depression choosing not to go to school for a couple days and his parents discussed it and decided maybe it was best that they moved; since their child often talked about AMERICAN . His father managed to use his psyhic abilities to get a higher up job within the AMERICAN branch and soon they moved to NEW YORK . At this point Miumi’s powers were still dormant but not for much longer as his freshman year at a high school they went to a history musemum. It was there he got harasshed and ended up snapping and this inevitably caused the awakening of his X gene, the end result of course was Miumi transforming into a large Smilodon and running away from the sound. He went out into a crowded New York streets, albeit it wasn’t through the front door, he had went through a glass window. He was so afraid he just kept running and running until he reached near his house; where he encountered his mother. She extended her empathetic powers in fear, quickly realized it was her child, and quickly told Miumi to run to the park. She of course went there and calmed her child in private; after all this Miumi and his family would once again move due to the ostronizing they knew he would face.
They managed to find a place in Salem , where his father transferred jobs to albeit he was still holding his position it would require him to occasionally fly for business trips and use the computer. After the initial transformations over the course of a few weeks, Miumi began to rapidly lose weight and experiences rapid hair and nail growth for a couple weeks and by the end, Miumi had lost over eighty pounds due to an enhanced metabolism. Miumi would be starting his SOPHMORE year in Salem and since they has adopted wearing faintly feminine clothing due to his androgynous nature.
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It is unknown exactly how but within Miumi’s genetic coding; an exact replica of a SMILODON FATALIS genetic code exists. It is unknown how exactly the power is reacted but based off the first incident of Miumi’s power is presumed to be activated by a hormone released by the pituitary gland. This chemical reaction seems to be strong enough to alter Miumi’s behavior patterns and has noticed to cause Miumi to become feral at times and extremely anti-social; not that he wasn’t like that before. It is noticed that the initial change was caused indirectly by fear and the awakening of the dormant X gene on a field trip to a historical museum in New York. An after affect was Miumi’s metabolism had been heightened and his body began to convert most of his fat into lean muscles; which changed many of his features. Of course there is always a backlash occasionally Miumi is noticed to become feral, possessive, violent. It typically passes as his body regulates the imbalances but can take a while; it is akin to a bipolar disorder at times. It appears that his ability he can do FULL- BODY transformations, which could include changing his entire body into a cat entity of a variety of sizes; at this point he is capable of both large and small. While the largest he can do at this moment is akin to the SMILODON POPULAR reaching at the very max of 800 pounds which is slightly heavier than average for a creature of this species. It is noticed despite its large and muscular size it isn’t all that agile and relies on lunges for attacks and possesses large canines. On the opposite side of the spectrum Miumi can also turn into the smallest of it’s genus the SMILODON GRACILIS which can at its maximum hit around 225 pounds . Of course he is also capable of PARTIAL BODY changes as well which can include his ears for improved hearing the nasal structure and insides of his nose for improved smell, the number of his taste receptors. He most commonly uses this for the muscular and bone structures.
- FULL TRANSFORMATION :
This ability allows Miumi to transfer into a full bodied SMILODON FATALIS , while he can dictate the size depending upon the situation. Of course due the rapid increase of muscle regardless of form is noticed that when in these forms his strength is well above average and could be called super human, as he could easily shatter a bone with a bat of his paws. His jaw strength is one thing to also be wary of as it could possibly surpass a crocodile in his largest forms and in his smallest, he could be akin to being bitten by a pit-bull. While he is not incredibly agile; he could possibly keep up with a wolf for a short period of time, but most of his speed would come from his lunging ability which is enough to propel him a couple meters at once. In this state he is also gifted with enhanced senses of hearing, smell, taste, sight and even touch; which are mostly caused by having more receptors to be stimulated. In smaller forms it is noticed he is more agile.
- PARTIAL TRANSFORMATION-EARS:
This part of his ability allows for selective body part mutation, in this case it is his ears. He is capable causing the cells of his ears and even the structure to change without any directly ill effects. The result of this change is Miumi’s humanoid ears will suddenly twist and grow into a cat’s shaped ears and be covered in an oddly leopard printed fur that is mostly black in nature while the rings an off shade of chocolate brown. However, despite aesthetic properties it causes Miumi’s sense of hearing to be greater than most dogs and due to the paranoia caused by hormonal imbalances of the after transformations Miumi often keep this activated.
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Post by Jubilee on Aug 20, 2012 20:46:00 GMT -7
Your subskills need fixing. You've grouped too many abilities together in single subskill. I'd recommend you do one subskill as a full normal transformation. As for your partial transformations and enhanced senses while in normal form, each different type of partial transformation (for example just changing the arm) should be a different subskill. And having heightened (vision for example) while in normal form would require a subskill.
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Post by MIUMI on Aug 20, 2012 21:05:20 GMT -7
fixed
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Post by Lizzy on Aug 20, 2012 21:11:34 GMT -7
Approved.
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